A Piece Of Paradise

A Piece of Paradise by  Leonie Thorpe

This story is about the Rain God and the Sun God. The Rain God looked down at the village and saw that they were a very happy village and the Rain God was proud of the stream that she had created.

One day they had a argument over whose food gardens were bigger and better. They decided to settle the argument by having a competition on growing food in their areas.  The prize for winning the competition was the four bright stars in sky known as the Southern Cross.

At the end of season none of them had any good crops to show each other because all the crops needed sunshine and rain. They agreed that they needed each for growing their crops.

The four bright stars were set up in the sky in the south.

The characters in his story are the Rain God and the Sun God.

This story takes place in the sky.

I like this story because it talks about the Rain God and the  Sun God and the Southern Cross Stars. This story  is very impressing.

Story Review

Title: A Passion for Ponies

By: Donna cherry

WALT: review what I have read

This article is about a girl named Chelsea that has a pony named Teddy. Everyday after school she would go to the paddock and play with her pony .She would give her snacks and  would keep her ponies water clean.Sometimes Chelsea would meet up with her friend Sarah who has a pony as well.

Sometimes on the weekend they would go to the pony club where they learnt about their pets and where they can do some jumping and courses.

I like this story because it talks about ponies and  I have always wanted to get one. I have learnt a lot about ponies.